How varied

My favorite English teacher in high school taught me several lessons that have stayed with me. One was, briefly, “Don’t start sentences with ‘the.'”
Another was, “Don’t use ‘very.’ It means nothing.”
Imagine my delight when I found this post.

http://writerswrite.co.za/45-ways-to-avoid-using-the-word-very

Keep it simple and truthful and …

We sat, legs crossed, around a campfire on a summer night. Surrounded by woods and miles from home, we listened to a story of teens in a car on a country road. We could hear the gravel crunching under the tires as the couple  sped away from the terrifying vagabond. We screamed when we heard about the hook in the door handle.
Here are a few reminders about how to get your hook into your readers. (Sorry, I couldn’t resist.)

The Common Elements of Good Storytelling

http://thenextweb.com/entrepreneur/2014/03/19/common-elements-good-storytelling/