Don’t get too attached to the first draft of the beginning of a story. I try not to. Here are some reasons why you may want to revise it. (And, just so you know, Wendig isn’t one for euphemisms.)
The Breadcrumbs At The Beginning Of The Story | terribleminds: chuck wendig
http://terribleminds.com/ramble/2014/11/05/the-breadcrumbs-at-the-beginning-of-the-story/
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